[DRBD-user] Public draft of DRBD Users' Guide available, feedback requested

[Florian Haas]

Paul,

On Tuesday 26 February 2008 14:02:56 Paul Court wrote:
> > We have just published an initial public draft of the all-new DRBD Users'
> > Guide which will henceforth be available at
> > http://www.drbd.org/users-guide/.
> >
> > This guide is going to be in "public draft" status all through the month
> > of March. We request, strongly encourage and much appreciate feedback.
> > Corrections are more than welcome, as are suggestions for improvement.
>
> Chapter 2.
> ----------
> ** http://www.drbd.org/users-guide/s-replication-protocols.html
> IMO, it might reat a bit better if the current note ("Data loss...") is
> just part of the above paragraph, and the note text below is the one
> actually in the note box!

Sounds reasonable. I swapped the paragraphs per your suggestion.

> ** http://www.drbd.org/users-guide/s-handling-disk-errors.html
> The end of the first sentance does not read quite right:- "...or it can
> hide I/O errors from upper layers from IO errors.". You could use "...
> or it can hide I/O errors from upper layers."

Fixed.

> That's my 2 bits worth from the first section. I'll read the rest later.

Please do. Further suggestions welcome.

Thanks!
Cheers,
Florian

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